Originally Posted by angry_nerd_rock

i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.


You paint a pretty picture
Of your suar-coated world
Treat me like I'm different
Try to teach me what you've heard
But I figured it out the hard way
Cuz nothing is what it seems
I can't put down the needle
It's like it's callin after me
IT WON'T LET GO!


WAKE UP!
And open your eyes
WAKE UP!
It's all a big lie
WAKE UP!
Your wasting your time
WAKE UP!
WAKE UP!


My life's too short to waist it with you
Your taking up my time
I don't need to take this **** from you
Just give me back what's mine
But before I go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go