Thread: lyrical critique anyone?
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Old 12.14.04, 11:07 AM
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Thanks man! That was very encouraging for me as a songwriter, which has never been my forte. I like the alliteration idea, that may just smooth things out a little...

Anyone else have any ideas?
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