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One of the best songs i've ever heard 0 0%
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It needs some work 4 36.36%
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Old 10.23.04, 9:58 AM
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I need someone else's opinion on my song

i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.


You paint a pretty picture
Of your suar-coated world
Treat me like I'm different
Try to teach me what you've heard
But I figured it out the hard way
Cuz nothing is what it seems
I can't put down the needle
It's like it's callin after me
IT WON'T LET GO!


WAKE UP!
And open your eyes
WAKE UP!
It's all a big lie
WAKE UP!
Your wasting your time
WAKE UP!
WAKE UP!


My life's too short to waist it with you
Your taking up my time
I don't need to take this **** from you
Just give me back what's mine
But before I go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go
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Old 10.23.04, 12:09 PM
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thanx, i'll try to work with that.
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Old 10.24.04, 3:31 PM
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I'm pretty sure Goldfinger released a song with a similar chorus
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I don't listin to Goldfinger so i wouldn't know that.
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Those lyrics are quite emo, IMO. Not really my thing, but heh, you'll probably get some p*ssy. Good luck at your show
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from the gibson website

lyrics: wasted time between solos.
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...i musta missed that last time i was on there......i've never heard that before.


....i don't really like the last verse so instead of it being :
But before i go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go

i changed it to :
Everytime i turn it's always there
It's driving me insane
Parinoid voices in my head
Keep tellin me i'm to blame
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i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.


You paint a pretty picture
Of your suar-coated world
Treat me like I'm different
Try to teach me what you've heard
But I figured it out the hard way
Cuz nothing is what it seems
I can't put down the needle
It's like it's callin after me
IT WON'T LET GO!


WAKE UP!
And open your eyes
WAKE UP!
It's all a big lie
WAKE UP!
Your wasting your time
WAKE UP!
WAKE UP!


My life's too short to waist it with you
Your taking up my time
I don't need to take this **** from you
Just give me back what's mine
But before I go I'de like to say something
Just so you will know
You told me it was wrong to spread my wings
You were afraid to let me go
nice lyrics!! have you put some melody onto it? I can see from this one that you really got the talent to write song..

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Better than anything I could do

Anything sounds good with the right melody.
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