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#1
10.23.04, 9:58 AM
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I need someone else's opinion on my song
i wrote this song and i need to hear someone else's opinion then my friends cuz we have to perform it soon and i dont wanna play some gay-ass song. The sound is kinda like KITTIE MEETS EVENESCENCE, so try to imagine that and the beginning starts out with a heavy bass riff.
You paint a pretty picture Of your suar-coated world Treat me like I'm different Try to teach me what you've heard But I figured it out the hard way Cuz nothing is what it seems I can't put down the needle It's like it's callin after me IT WON'T LET GO! WAKE UP! And open your eyes WAKE UP! It's all a big lie WAKE UP! Your wasting your time WAKE UP! WAKE UP! My life's too short to waist it with you Your taking up my time I don't need to take this **** from you Just give me back what's mine But before I go I'de like to say something Just so you will know You told me it was wrong to spread my wings You were afraid to let me go
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#2
10.23.04, 12:09 PM
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thanx, i'll try to work with that.
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#3
10.24.04, 3:31 PM
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I'm pretty sure Goldfinger released a song with a similar chorus
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#4
10.24.04, 5:00 PM
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I don't listin to Goldfinger so i wouldn't know that.
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#5
10.24.04, 5:46 PM
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Those lyrics are quite emo, IMO. Not really my thing, but heh, you'll probably get some p*ssy. Good luck at your show
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#7
10.26.04, 6:41 PM
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...i musta missed that last time i was on there......i've never heard that before.
....i don't really like the last verse so instead of it being : But before i go I'de like to say something Just so you will know You told me it was wrong to spread my wings You were afraid to let me go i changed it to : Everytime i turn it's always there It's driving me insane Parinoid voices in my head Keep tellin me i'm to blame
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#8
10.15.11, 7:43 AM
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Last edited by kurtdaniel; 10.16.11 at 11:09 PM.
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