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Old 08.03.07, 1:03 AM
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little lyric snippets...

here for the taking.
Stuck in a box I made myself/little sign says/welcome to hell/useing whats left of/my brain cells/to wage a war with myself

More SOAD-esque
The system is down/try not to frown/its time to decide/do or DIEEEEEEEEE!

Life screwed you over/lost a finger to the mower/Well it ain't over!

One sided politics/they're just a bunch of hicks/they need 40 licks/while we flick our bics!

a two part song:
BOY:we were happy together/we had something forever/then you came and caused this pain...

GIRL:we built a life together/(insert good lyrics here plz!)

BOY:Life was better together
Girl:now its like bad weather
BOY:Cold and alone
GIRL:It seems as tho/no one is home...

BOY:we were happy together/we had something forever/then you came and caused this pain...

GIRL:we built a life together/(insert good lyrics here plz!

(write ending here!)

Random fun verse:
turned out the lights/just to stop the fights/this is starting to sound/just like hawthorne heightsXD

hmm...
Police line do not cross/disgruntled worker killed his boss.

a good song TITLE
Dead Ends are What Life Sends
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When you said here for the taking, did you mean we could write our own song using that intro? Because i really like that intro, it has some potential...

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Old 08.03.07, 11:55 AM
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I'd like a bit of credit for it, and you can use it however you like. do send me the lyrics you write, i want a shot at writing the instrumental for it.
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I'm stuck in this box i made myself

The little sign says welcome to hell

And i'm useing whats left of my brain cells

To wage a war with myself.

And I'm FALLIN!

Fallin back down ag-ain

Let me tell you my fri-end

I don't think this war will ever end.

The blasts

The screams

The time to meet

Th-e end.


I'm stuck in this box i made myself

The little sign that says welcome to hell

And using what's left these brain cells,

To wage a war with myself.

The screams of agony,

Even thought it's just me, here alone.

From now on i know i'm on my own.


If you like that, you can use it.... That's all i can think of atm though....
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I didn't really add that much to it.....just thought of some stuff and wrote it down...
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Old 08.03.07, 12:13 PM
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i could se billie joe armstrong singing with dave grohl(drums), elias reddy(ryth. gtr.),joe trohman(lead guitar),and pete wentz(bass) backing him up.
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after the intro you could scream WAAAAAAAAAAAR! and jump into something SOAD-esque
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I could see, me(vocals) me(lead guitar) me(rythm guitar) me (drums), and finally me( on bass)......lol no not really, but my friend is a pretty good singer, and i think he could get the sound i'm going for on this song.....
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Yeah that'd be pretty sweet, i was thinking it would sound pretty good if it was sung like the best of you, by foo fighters......
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Old 08.03.07, 12:21 PM
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im a good rythm player. lay down a track and ill add to it.
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I would, but i don't have anything to record with at my house
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Old 08.03.07, 12:28 PM
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15 dollar compy mic. OR 40 behringer(UB802 or UB502) mixer Nady SP-1 Mic pack, and a couple of 1/4" to 1/8" or 3.5mm cables.
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Bump, added some
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I'll get that mic whenever i get the chance, but if you want to, send me the guitar that you had planned for this song, and i'll add on some riffs or something....
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my guitar is still being repainted...about 2-3 more weeks tops. The stuidio isn't even set up yet.
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