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Old 11.22.04, 9:29 PM
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My New Song!!!

Check it out, this is my new song, "When Evil Strikes!" Honestly, it's supposed to be cheesy, so keep that it mind.

You're eating cereal,
a hand comes from the bowl,
pulls you into oblivion,
sucks you whole.
All you're feeling-total desecration.
The prize you got in your Cap'n Cruch was eternal damnation!

Always in the shadows,
Threatening your life,
You'll never be prepared,
When evil strikes!

You're playing golf and then your caddy becomes possessed,
He grabs a 9-iron and hits you in the head,
He made a hole in 1-side of your skull,
Now you're part of the flesh-eating, zombie occult!

Chorus

Evil takes many shapes and sizes,
never know what, when, or who,
That cow over there could just jump up and eat you!
You could be on the entrance ramp, getting on highway 10,
When aliens come and take you to the mothership!
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!

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Chorus
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Old 11.22.04, 9:30 PM
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The "In the shadows" part is the chorus, and the "evil takes many shapes and sizes" part is the bridge, in case you didn't know or you were wondering.
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Re: My New Song!!!

As far as I am concerned, any song that starts out like

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You're eating cereal,
a hand comes from the bowl
is destined to be the next "Stairway to Heaven."
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dude those were some sweet lyrics....very funny.
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