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Old 12.23.07, 8:00 PM
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new song chorus

We have some verses for this song, but many people have said this chorus is the best part, and a majority of people have the demo we put out of it. Here goes.

Coincidentally, this song is sung like the chorus of "The Reason" by Hoobastank.

Hear me out
Believe me when I say
There Ain't no other way
We can't go back again

Listen Now
You know that things have changed
I won't be back one day
To see if you're still around

Hear me out
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Maybe you could put a link to hear the lyric with music as a whole, because to me it is an average adolescent-band lyric, no offense.
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yeah, thats one of our more superficial songs, but one of our catchiest. we'd like to put some more lyrics up soon, with a little more depth
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