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Old 06.10.04, 6:45 AM
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Please rate my Death Metal song...

"The Bludgeoned Loaf"

Claws of death, beckon a knife
A rotting slut, forsaken by life
forsaken forever
Bludgeoned Loaf, steaming terror
a sacrifice to society
Admit thy sins

Raped from society
The bludgeoned loaf

Beckon thy doom,
you whore with gorilla schmegma
No moral commitment to life,
Embrace thy demise
Texas Pete drips,
Blood of Satan lives on the bludgeoned loaf
Bleak future arrives: it's time to die

Raped from society
The bludgeoned loaf

Bludgeoned loaf, Pipe
A threat to society
Demoralized by fear
Eat my ass, bludgeoned loaf
broiling C*nt
I need death
I'm f*ckin crunk, yeah I'm crunk

Satan, I love thee
Sign of the beast marked in vaginal grease
(2x)

dehumanized bludgeoned loaf
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I really like those lyrics, actually. They're good because they're so cliche death metal, but they're much less tongue-in-cheek then most death metal lyrics. I have the urge to sing them; if you want to record this and need a singer, I volunteer.
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Its got everything... vaginal grease, loafs, rotting sluts, broiling ****s... great stuff.
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Old 06.13.04, 8:29 AM
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I really like those lyrics, actually. They're good because they're so cliche death metal, but they're much less tongue-in-cheek then most death metal lyrics. I have the urge to sing them; if you want to record this and need a singer, I volunteer.
Thanks. It's actually already been recorded and if I could post soundclips, I would.
My project is called the dehumanizing brutalizer machine, and what I do is actually make fun of death metal and all the subordinate styles that go along with it. I love death metal but it's so fun to make a joke out of it.

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brutal dude...... hehehe, my drummer is all about the death metal ****, i'm more of a grind/posthardcore kinda guy, but i'm open to alot of stuff....
check it!
*death growl*
shoot your mom in the face with a shotgun!
stab her in the stomach with a soldering iron!
pour battery acid in her soup and take her to seaworld!
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Old 06.20.04, 8:37 AM
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pour battery acid in her soup and take her to seaworld!
NICE.
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Dude... what the f*ck is a loaf? I must be missing something.


I liked the vaginal grease part... well done.
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OK, for the loaf question, I'll just have to explain the inspiration for the song.
Me and about 8 other people went to a steak house called The Lone Star. At steak houses they usually give you this big loaf of bread before your salad comes out. After we ate our steak we still had this loaf of bread sitting there so all of us decided to stick every single piece of silverware into it. Then I poured TEXAS PETE hot sauce on it to make it look like it got bludgeoned and it was bleeding to death.

I have no life.

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i didnt get the loaf part either i thought it was some kid of sex term id never heard of...ok nowi get it tho

cool lyrics dude
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