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Yonder Window (that's the song title)
I know the end is near.
I know that hopes won't last. I know the endless stare trapped far beyond the glass. Stay still, you entity, like nothing else alive. Shoot back a static gaze. Make empty endless days. I know thee like a war. It rages on elsewhere. I know you all too well. I smell you in the air. Stand there and dance for me. Prey fall for restless eyes. Sap still a wasted will, this drive that life defies. Thoughts?
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way cool man. i like how you rhymed LAST with GLASS. i know know why but that part really stood out to me. i like it.
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